I used a fine-tuned model agentlans/gemma-3-4b-it-claude to revise your poem. After some manual adjustments, the result exceeded my expectations. According to the model, "it's revised in a more elegant and poetic way. The imagery, rhyme, and flow create a stronger overall poem that better captures the essence of the concept of code and love in a way that's both technical and romantic."
Unusual features:
- iambic tetrameter (not pentameter)
- completely in rhyming couplets
Sonnet 0x01: In Your Eyes, a World of Data Takes its Hold
0xBA 0xB5 0x5, I speak in code and rhyme,
Registers shiver in time with your clock's chime.
Stack frames blossom, a bloom of recursion's grace,
While I trace you in raw pointers, a love's embrace.
MOV AX, 0x0B, I align to your heartbeat's plea,
Each tick a foot in machine-code decree.
JMP if you want me, my branch misdirects to you,
Cache lines flushed, blushing in memory's hue.
PUSH AX, PUSH BX, I stack my lines in your favour,
Each opcode a step across your RAM's colour.
INT 0x10 for the glow of your smile's ray,
System halts, and all processes yield to your sway.
In your eyes a world of data takes its hold,
A beautiful love story in the bits of code.